process paper

In order to make the best ham sandwich, there’s always a set of steps you need to take. First you should have a clean workspace, because if your making any kind of food in a messy place that’s just gross. Then make sure you have clean hands and get everything ready; what you will need is 2 slices of bread, ham, butter knife, lettuce, avocado, and tomatoes. Next you take the 2 slices of bread out of the bag and into the toaster. After they are toasted take them out of the toaster and put the desired amount of mayonnaise on each slice of bread. Next you take out the ham and put the desired amount of ham you want on one of the slices of bread; For example I like to roll my every slice of ham in a little roll like taco and line them up. Then get the avocado and peel the skin off and slice the avocado into small slices, and then place the avocado slices on top of the ham. Then you take the lettuce and make sure you wash it first. Then take the lettuce and cut it in the way you like it. I prefer to have whole pieces of lettuce, so I keep the whole leaf of the lettuce together and place the whole lettuce leafs on top of the avocado. Next, get the tomato and make sure to slice it into round slices and after that take the slices and place them on top of the lettuce. Lastly place the other slice of the bread on top of the all the other ingredients so that the mayo is in the inside. I like to cut my sandwiches diagonal so I hold it in place and take the knife and slice it down the middle diagonal.

Important person : )

My best friend Jose is a very talented athlete. First of all, He is always involved in a school sport whenever he has a chance. He has a lot of experience with soccer because he has been playing since he was 7 years old.  Later on as he got older he decided to play football, in 6^th grade. He started off with no experience at all, but every year he tried harder and harder and until he got better. Then in high school as a sophomore he made varsity because the more he practiced the better he got. Then, out of school he plays in a soccer club also. I would say he is the most talented soccer player I have seen play. To be play soccer or even football, you should be probably be really conditioned; he also runs a lot in his spare time. He gets up early in the mornings and runs, also when he has time later in the day. When he gets out of high school he wants to continue on with playing a sport, I think he will probably end up playing soccer all his life. Finally, When he has barely a freshman at school, he was getting offered to go play for the Minnesota soccer team, scholarships and everything paid, but he decided to stay here in Arizona at least until he finished high school. He has also been offered to travel to Mexico to play with a soccer team from there. He would always get opportunity’s to travel around to either just go watch games or to check something out and see if he liked it. He such an athletic person, I wouldn’t be surprised if he ends up doing something with sports.

one-fourth through the semester

So far the course of ENG 091 is going pretty good. It's not as hard as i thought it would be. The homework is not to hard, but not to easy. One thing i would say the teacher could change would be is the writers workshops, I don't really understand the point of it. I would rather edit my own paper, then have someone else doing it.

Is the United States a health-conscious nation?

I don’t believe the United States is health-Conscious Nation because there are a lot of people with problems because of their weight. Not only is it obese people that cause the United States to not have a health cautious nation, because even the skinniest person can have problems because of the junk they eat. In the U.S. the Drinks here are so much bigger than anywhere else, and the bigger the cup is offered the bigger they want to drink and soda has so much sugar that causes people to be obese or possibly have diabetes. There is a lot of junk offered here to eat. If the U.S. was health cautious there wouldn’t be so much fast foods restaurants and greasy foods. Yes, its people choice on what they eat but it’s also not helping much having it just offered to you at any time of the day.

Revised paper of how to study for an exam

In order to study for an important exam you need to have a set plan. Such as what you need to study, the time you have and your surroundings. First it would be knowning what you need to study. In order to study well for an important exam is for example by highlighting the important notes on what you need to study. Also, when a teacher or professor says “this is going to be on a test” it’s probably a hint to take notes and study for the test.  Second, a good way to study for an important exam would be organizing your time. Any extra time you have between your busy hours is always a good time to squeeze in work or a little study time. The more studying you do, the better the results will be to the exam. Last, but not least would be the surroundings you have. Being in a nice quiet area to study helps keep everything more clear in the mind without any distractions. Therefore, knowing what it is you need to study, the time you use wisely and your surroundings will make a difference in your score on an exam.

Changes :

-added words into some of the fragments I had

-added transactions

-made the sentences more clear and straight to the point